An idea I had after realizing my friends were convincing me not to like someone by hurting my feelings because they might be jealous of me or something...
You might have told me I was imagining things,
when I'm almost certain I wasn't.
You keep on telling me he thinks I'm annoying,
when he's told a lot of people that he thinks their annoying.
As if it matters.
You said you know he doesn't like me,
but who said you were right, and who said that I cared?
Exactly.
Then he talked to me today,
when you told me he was ignoring me.
He even started the conversation.
I should tell you that you had no right to point it out,
and hurt me.
But I'm not that mean.
So instead I'll push what you told me out of my head,
I really like it, actually, very to the point about everything, and really clear on the meaning, even if you hadn't explained it. I do have one thing though, I think with the last line, "Now are you happy?" would sound better if you put a comma right after now, so it would be like a pause. Dramatic, I guess, you know? But I really liked it, very raw.
I really like it, actually, very to the point about everything, and really clear on the meaning, even if you hadn't explained it. I do have one thing though, I think with the last line, "Now are you happy?" would sound better if you put a comma right after now, so it would be like a pause. Dramatic, I guess, you know? But I really liked it, very raw.
Well,I made this account for my friends in school to see my writing,since I want them to know I'm a writer.
I am 13,my birthday is November 23rd,and I am a Saggitarius.
I like to write,play game.. more..