Scorched

I did my best here to write a traditional haiku. This one is a a poem about endurance embodied by life enduring the scorching sun.

Summer heat scorches

 

Draining moisture from the world

 

Life endures the fire

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy my simple attempt at haiku.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

I have enjoyed your single attempt at a haiku...good job!

[Omar]

"Life endures the fire"... OK... I love the way you see summer not only as a season but as a part of life itself. Like the way you related it to what we go through. Brilliant. Simple but impressive.