She's gonna break soon.

She's gonna break soon.

A Poem by Karissa.

She's gonna break soon.

She doesn't know how to react to faulter.

She knows to keep going like there's nothing wrong.

She keeps pretending.

She's gonna break soon.

She trusts no one.

She shuts the world out.

She keeps resisting.

She's gonna break soon.

She keeps her fake smile on.

She won't speak out.

She faded out who she was.

She's gonna break soon.

She has so many problems.

She doesn't know what's left to do.

She lost herself in it all.

I am going to break soon. 

© 2008 Karissa.


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to be honest that's me. i shut people out. i did the same thing. i still am this way.
don't want to be but i am. ive become bitter because i loved someone and they dont love me.
very good. keep writing.
your friend,
-mike-

Posted 16 Years Ago


not bad, but is starting every line with she necessary? i guess you're trying to say it's someone else, but in the end it's really you, or something like that. i don't know. i don't know much about writing and sometimes i wish i took up carpentry or something like that, you know? working with my hands is what i should be doing...

Posted 16 Years Ago


WEll written, I really like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Karissa.
Karissa.

San Diego, CA



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I'm Karissa. I'm 15 years old and I have a lot to say. Lets get to know each other. Beauty In The Breakdown - The Scene Aesthetic more..

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A Poem by Karissa.