TRUE LOVER'S LIGHT

I love you so much,

I can't be without you.

Your in my mind and heart,

with feelings that are true.

Whenever I'm alone,

I'm only thinking of you.

And when I'm asleep,

I dream of us too.

Your the only person

who makes my world go round.

You give my life meaning,

even when i am down.

You help me through times,

that don't seem so bright.

So i give you my heart,

please don't let it fade or die.

For i love you so much,

 with feelings that are true

That I forever won't ever be able to

live or be without you.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem about a year or two ago, and it was for the spur of the moment so please ignore any punctuation or grammar errors. and please be honest about what you think.

Reviews

[Sean Ethan Torres]

Its wonderful. I told you that your poems were better than mine. ((_^