The iceman

The iceman

A Story by dukovan

Ice in my veins today and all week too.
Forced myself to move until I just moved.

Cold packaged ice
sometimes it's flimsy
sometimes ice block hard
sometime you can hit them and break them up
sometimes you have to throw them on the floor

just throwing them over, bag after bag
fueling the act of drinking, and hanging out all summer
I don't partake in the same way

I'm the Iceman this summer
I participate in an entirely different wavelength than society 

this suits me

I fit into the empty spaces, like water running through the spaces of broken up pieces of ice
like walking through busy convenience stores 
navigating through the concessions
encouraging the beading sweat to find routes away from my eyes 
moving through doors and exchanges of words by the people of the city
I sweat, and it freezes on my face, then melts as quickly

I exist as a constant melting and freezing
hot and cold at the same time
simply filling my niche
just moving through the path of least resistance

Did you know some ice melts slower than other ice?
It depends on the conditions it was frozen in
I'm finding my melting point
and distinguishing it from sweating

so many varieties of water
I'm 80 percent
my bottles of water get hot while by the time I get back in the truck

My ice melts some
Chemicals release from plastic and end up somewhere
not inside me
I stick beverages into torn bags every other stop
This is the logistics of water and ice

© 2018 dukovan


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This piece moves fluidly. Great analogy in the telling. Strong write.

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