Love a mistake

Coupled with love and lofted in song,

you gave it all of your thoughts.

Was it still worth the shot?

Cleared out your head 

and you took a deep breath

and hoped that feathers would fly out your chest

Crafted a dove, in wax and in words

carrier cages carried what hurts

the family branches

the hole in my shirt

The carrier wave

wearing a smile

We've all got to come down for a while

Crafted in song,

was raising you wrong

carved out a bit of eternity

In a cradle, eventually, too small

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I like the flow of this piece and various metaphors. Good read