spite

They were all waning in spite
of a confident change,
With a lack of assurance
And coiling graves.

The pipes are all hissing
Down the stair way
It still makes no sense to stay this way.

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

i love this, it has so much to tell in the short poem. very very intriguing overall

[rach]

Short and sweet, to the point.
I like it.

[Brittany]

I HAVE READ ALL OF YOUR POETRY AND I REALLY LOVE ALL OF IT YOU DO REALLY GOOD I HOPE YOU CAN READ MINE AND SEE HOW I DO

[Steven Cetta]

Actually this is short but it makes the point well.