slips

slips

A Poem by dukovan
"

maybe no more coffee

"

Freudian fodder

to feed the mouths

like the fountain of youth rediscovered.


Thought slips on a reflective pool in winter.

An illusion of Christ,

to feed the miracle.


suppression leaves the body eventually.

My sweat will freeze over.


An ironic side-note:

The same ice I hit my head on

suppressed the swelling.

© 2014 dukovan


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haha, yes more coffee... keep it coming

Your first stanza tied me up and pulled me into the piece. Had to chuckle at the side note too. You have a unique quality to your writing and I have to say i am loving it today. So glad you decided to share.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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dukovan

Oconomowoc, WI



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