Confession.

God knows everything and
God knows everyone and
God know me and I know you.
So whats the use?

He reads everything and
I read most of the time
and you read everything I write for you.
What do I do?

When you move past the first page
and you think you're out of time
my words are like knives
that paper-cut your finger.
Will you write with me too?

God knows everything and
God see's everyone
God knows me and i know you.
How should i move?

Reviews

[Meliss@k]

I reread this poem a few times and really wanted to know what exactly you were "confessing". I was thinking that maybe you were confessing that you were always going to hurt this person and that you wanted to spend time with them, live your life with them, yet you were confused as to if it would ever work out because you always end up hurting this person?
I couldn't really put the poem together, but please don't take that as a bad thing. It almost makes me enjoy the poem more, because there is so much mystery and i keep questioning "what is wrong?" "why does this person not know what to do?"

I wanted to jump into the poem and help you find your answers along your journey, yet not being able to do that made reading the poem even that much more mysterious and great. :)