Layers of leaves.

Layers of leaves.

A Poem by dukovan
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Its a good day, one of the best I've had actually.

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D                                G
Oh, what a good way to die.
D                              G      
Right between your eyes.
Em          G              Em
I'm having so much fun.
Em       G
In you I know
   D
I'm one.

D                                G
So whats the plan for tonight?
D                          G
For now close your eyes.
Em          G           Em
Show me how to die
Em          G           Em
but really how to live
Em          D             G
but really whats to live
         D
without dying?

D                           G
Make your bed and leave
D                                G
and shake those autumn trees.
D                G               Em
the leaves make their beds
Em              G              Em
and my mom folds the sheets
Em              G          Em    
and I shake out my head.
Em             G                  D
and my dad rakes the leaves

D             G             Em
I'm having so much fun.
Em             G              D   
In your eyes I know I'm won.

© 2012 dukovan


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I suggest layering something over the chords that sounds Eastern/middle eastern or mediterranean..IDk if that makes sense..but it seems to go with the theme and feel of this..if you record it you might be able to tinker with something that sounds a lil simple and dissonant over the chord pattern..just an idea...I don't play guitar, but I've witnessed good songs unfolds like that

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Oconomowoc, WI



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