I'm a dog.

I'm a dog.

A Poem by dukovan
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Its really a poem this time!!

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Aching feet deter from my swollen mind
as I long for a balloon to carry my hot head.
Lengthy greens wrap the earths tumor
where Labradors obey without leash. 

I tap my own longevity over the longitude of gravities tug.
I tap my hip to match my stride.
My double take is multiplying into a more vibrant memory,
I'm understanding my father as I practice reminiscence .

The latitude and axis age me and each year is times four.
The assortment of sour apples hanging from trees
turn sweet to my eyes as I write.
There is much more color in black and white.

I look down and see my paws as I am now holding my own leash.
My silver tongue is drooling for an audience,
and I sweat from my mouth.

© 2012 dukovan


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Brilliant. I love this! Such great imagery, and a fantastic idea... (:ab:)

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12 Years Ago

awesome! I haven't been getting reviews lately (probably because I don't take the time to review bac.. read more
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