Now and then.

My first pure lyrical I think, some musics gone with it, seems to fit well into musical structure. Just saying I'm excited about it, let me know what you think.

You're last stop or
why you came
are neither close to home
or going to stay.

Autumn aches
my chilly bones.
I am the leaves
and the seasons have me close.

I'm swept away to another home;
I find familiarity in your face.

Going back to the last place we came
was never really the same.

Going back to the last place we came;
we were never really the same.

A graduation I'll never know,
besides the black and white
grainy photo's.
"Oh,the ones I didn't know....
should've let them tell me so."

"Besides we can't go back."
"Besides we're right on track."

Roads are growing out my back,
I only glimpse now and then.

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I don't know how I missed this, but I am so glad I found it. It seems to me that your work is evolving in a wonderful way! I, too, wish I could hear the music you hear when you pen your work. One day, hopefully we can.

[Riley]

This would be a good song!

[Owlgirl]

Wow! Great job! That was lyricle and beautiful. Wonderful flow and rhythm, nice job. Magnificent song.

[eglantine]

For your first true self-proclaimed lyrical piece, it's very well done. I espcially like "Autumn aches / my chilly bones. / I am the leaves" beautiful! I'd love to hear you sing this--I'm very curious as to how you bound these words to which musical notes and from which instruments. It sounds very ... ray LaMontagne-esque in my head lol

[Falling Leaf.]

This was beautiful, and I'm sure it's twice as amazing with music to it. The only problem I found was, in the beginning, you used "you're" instead of your.
Other than that, bravo!

[afra]

beautiful ....good job once again