Heartache.

When I cry, it rains

beautiful petals-destructive

smearing faults into a mixture of shame

dripping down my face.

Reviews

[Sliver of Reality]

That is pretty good, but I myself don't like the short poetry. I think that poems need a flow and short poem don't allow that to happen. No offense.

[Claude]

Wow, wonderful word choice. You capture the emotion of heartache well. Bravo!