Threadbare emotions

Overtime loves fades when callously used..

Stretched

torn

and soaked

worn-in

and wore-out

my heart can no longer bear

being your denim jeans

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Antifranticbabydoll]

Straight to the point, very good! Keep writing!

[Dave W.]

Thank you again for the kind review, I like that it was as the poem, brevity

[Green]

I’ve seen hearts and love compared to lots of things over the years but I think this is the first time I’ve seen jeans be the comparison. It’s always fun to stumble upon something different.
I know brevity was the point but I’m still going to comment on it because it’s so hard to do short well. I feel like you made yourself even more of a challenge by having some especially short lines. This really made a picture in the reader’s mind even if only 20 words were used to make it. As a frequent wearer and rather hard user on a lot of my jeans, I instantly knew the feeling that would come with that type of misuse.
Great work.

[Dave W.]

Thank you Green, this is what I was going for.

[Davidgeo]

It's still a good fit Dave. For now.

[Dave W.]

Good day sir, hope everything has been well for you, also this poem was from a prompt "Threadbare" 20 words or less.

[Davidgeo]

I see, I feel foolish. I'm in the out group. I am unaware of these jive 20 word jam standards friendo.

[Dave W.]

I am on another poetry site called "Allpoetry" and there are contests there. this was an exercise in brevity.

[Davidgeo]

I know of allpoetry. I've been doing this for a while.