Love Eclipsed

Oh that I could be a vapor........

Oh that I could write 

of brighter days 

of warm nights

 

to talk of a sunrise

that inspires the heart

 

Or visit that place

where joy walks

and strolls

and languidly 

saunters along

 

I strain to see reason in 

this darkness of night

that ascended from below 

that covers and cloaks

morning's light

 

I refused to believe my lying eyes

my heart drown out

the truth of my mind 

imagination painted beautiful portraits

of what ifs and happily ever afters

reality killed the fantasy

 

she, like a mirage 

evaporated before my sight

taking her promises 

to satisfy my souls thirst

now memories mock 

in the mirror I see a fool

never again will

anyone receive this heart

 

vanished are the words to write

of love’s heights soared

or  its seas sailed

 

Oh that I could write of brighter days

and warm nights

 

there is no light in a house

whose foundation is sand

and it’s walls deceit

 

there is no warmth in a heart

bereft of love's passion

 

there is no sunrise when inspirations light

is eclipsed by depressions shadow. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[hiren]

Great to see erotic display pics to tempt people. Whom they are displaying to. Its not enough one husband whole f*****g on globe has to ogle them. I dont understand they are making you to dance with weak body with pain inside still dont give up. How a broken body dances to tgeir rock bodies??

[Dave W.]

You are a.mystery to me

[Dave W.]

I feel like you are saying alot that goes over my head

[hiren]

Hi Dave,

I understa
Nd why do you erite publicly, because everyone would read and throw a courtesy which is costing nothing for them. It is better to keep it to our eyes inside heart and never known to any. Let them dance eat how much ever want. Dont worry me and your mom are still alive to care your rest of your body and clean their s**t on you and us.
But remember nobody cares others as like tgemselves they want high things no matter what and use them at any cost, finally they say we care for you. True love of me/wife and mom never returned by any other relation, they are just showy.

They just threw review for your weeping heart in a very boastfull words with punctuation and grammar. That clearly shows how much they care to look secy themselves and content.

When you said lines flew without thinking, its understandablem how much your feelings are coming out

Anyways they know your weakness they how to make use of it on you and me. But they are forgetting one thing if they keep on shitting us it becomes a lavaratory your heart which they wont like further because it would be smilling i promise they might ran away to very costly things too

Dont worry about i know to handle use and throw plastic love a better reactive chemical that just burns that plastic

Kindly keep brave.
Your mom and me with you in every trouble
Loving your lines and adorable heart.

Jessy Jacob.

You see clearly the reviews they are just 2 to 4 lines thats where they read about your feelings and threw review as if caring

[Dave W.]

Thank you for the review, and thankyou for the amount t of thought you put into your review

[hiren]

Thank you for appreciating my effort. People doesnt even care about the effort still nlame to highhlight them.
I know how much you are caring outside butches who tgrew rock on you ignoring your own mother who raised you made you grow with luxury, now she is suffering in a four walled rough. Not time for her but praising comments to b*****s who are shitting on you your wife.

Great service you are doing to society b housrs.

[Kelly Scheppers]

There are so many lines I wanted to quote. You finessed your way through from start to finish, and gave me something to remember you by. An impression of who you are, and what you strive to become as a poet.

[Dave W.]

I think this is the kindest review I have read, thankyou.

[poetgurl]

This is touching, yet heart tugging.
Nicely written & expressed

[Dave W.]

Thank you for the kind words, sometimes it's so hard to just have a feeling in the depths thats hard to put to words, once they come, it just flows out like water.