She?

Somewhere between love and madness I live

did she call 

did I miss her 

what if she's angry 

I hope she likes it 

I hope she smiles 

she isn't answering back 

what time is it 

is she sleeping 

is she awake 

maybe I am bothering her 

why can't I stop thinking about her 

Is this love 

is this madness 

is it both......

Author's Note

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Reviews

[A.H.]

lovely piece of a write. I like the way the thoughts are laid out, the uneasiness, the restlessness, the excitement and the longing - all coming together beautifully here. thanks for sharing, Dave.

[Dave W.]

Once again, thank you for the kind words.

[John the Baptist]

Actually, romantic love might qualify as a form of madness.

[Dave W.]

100% correct

[Davidgeo]

You need to smoke some grass Dave.

Good poem, I think most humans, not just male humans, feel about the same. There really is a loneliness epidemic out there. And it looks like it's being exploited by nefarious people. (which isn't new of course, but, the scale is different now... 50 million lonely man boys are going to ruin all our lives : ( ) Not that it matters to us materially, what is going to happen is going to happen regardless... I just wish we didn't have to be so f*****g cunty about it as a country. It's disheartening to know so many of my countrymen are f*****g morons and wannabe Nazis. I'm just trying to get laid out here... this culture war chaos skulduggery style of governing is f*****g all of that up for me. She's ruining my love party David.

[Dave W.]

Hey David, lonliness sux, epidemic is a good word for it, certainly there are alot of stupid people out there, I hope things are well for you.

[Dessi]

oh. I think I see.......
great poem as always

[Dave W.]

Thankyou very much

[Writergurl]

I really know this feeling right now, I am going through an ugly divorce and it is hard on me.

[Dave W.]

You really are going through a terrible storm