Nostalgia's song

Some songs take me back......

Within notes we dance and sing

our hearts go on remembering

bittersweet, loves first kiss

to return our only wish

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

the only person who actually cares about me is a prostitute name Narumi. the moments we share together are magical, genuinely wonderful. i know im just a client to her, but i can tell she likes me (not that there's a future here or anything). i treat her right, and she gives me a lot of kisses. but this wont last obviously, and i already feel that this liaison is becoming just a memory...

[Dave W.]

The sadest part is knowing always about the temporality of the relationship, like knowing an end is coming but desparatly trying to hold on to the bits of happiness you, like sand slipping through your fingers. I hope you find that lasting happiness and a love who will value you greatly. I am always glad for our reveiws.

[emmajoygreen]

So much said in so few words, you chose them carefully and emotionally, Dave. Wishing you well on and offline.

[Dave W.]

It was a contest and the prompt was just Music in 20 words or less. I like the challenge, most deff wishing you well as well, always good to hear from you.

[emmajoygreen]

That's quite an entry and whilst if fits the bill so well, your words are warmly subtle. Good luck !