Together alone

Together alone

A Poem by Dave W.
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Silence can be so loud.....

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- deafening silence - 

- we used to talk all the time -

- together alone -

© 2024 Dave W.


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My long walk in life has been quite a few of these together alone moments.

Posted 5 Hours Ago


Dave W.

3 Hours Ago

There is a certain beauty in silence.
I love silence because it is NOT silent, it is deafeningly loud if you listen! A couple grow close in silence and are comfortable with and in it. In such silence, one doesn't have to say anything, the words and feelings fill the silence. Lovely write, Dave. Thank you for sharing...

Posted 12 Hours Ago


Dave W.

3 Hours Ago

Conversations had without saying a word are sweet.
Not to dispute Coyote...Dave W. Even True friends sometimes need a break from talking. That does NOT mean the LOVE is not there. Maybe a break is NEEDED. You WILL talk again. THEN, the air will be clear and the conversations not stale. TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES.

Posted 16 Hours Ago


Dave W.

16 Hours Ago

No, this was a prompt that asked what quiet sounds like
GlendaK

16 Hours Ago

Oh...Well, if I'd known that up front...lol
I don't like the silence Dave. I raised-up four children and I have five grandchildren. The house is silent now. When two people quit talking. John Dryden said it best. When the love is not here no-more. Time to separate. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 19 Hours Ago


Dave W.

19 Hours Ago

Thank you very much, Coyote have a great day.
Coyote Poetry

19 Hours Ago

You are welcome Dave.

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Added on November 26, 2024
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Dave W.
Dave W.

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