Evening Romp-Ravin Ink prompt

Evening Romp-Ravin Ink prompt

A Poem by Dave W.
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To be young again....

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Summer nights we'd steal away, 

out the house out to play, 

down the road along Wilshire St.

Running romping stamping our feet, 

till to the park in joy arrived. 

These evenings where we felt alive, 

imagination our only guide, 

to the top and down the slide. 

The world to us belonged alone, 

with friends so dear then back to home.

© 2024 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
Stay young in your mind....

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So blessed are those memories of childhood romp. Thank you for the beauty of rememberance.

Take care - Dave -

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

You as well Dave
Beautiful poem, I am still a child at heart, these moments will always be beautiful memories to me,.

Thanks for sharing.... -Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Amy
Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the review
Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're welcome
I liked it how you headstart your recalling memory... we used run behind butterflies and dragon fly... especially hide and seek . Crocodile game.. much more.. we and our neighbors did had same timeline before, now everything is changed...
Yes staying young in mind is always good for mental wellness and physical wellness too..
Good writing.. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you Jey that was a great review
Ah, I remember those days well and used to take great joy from jumping in puddles, as well as trying to turn my stomach inside out on the swings, but these days I csn only imagine them instead and think back to hoe simple life can be as a kid and it is only the seriousness of society that insists we grow up and get all serious, like there is any actual physical evidence that that I'd the way we should go.
Be young, be silly and never mind those pesky, frumpy grown ups.
Sure you'll get bumps and bruises, but when was the last time you saw a kid explode from filling their mouth with too much sherbert and then trying to do a loop-de-loop on the swings!
Child safety is so overrated. Go on, love a little while you still can! 😃

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thankyou Lorry this was a great review
My feet ready to race reading your lines. Filled with energy pure delight ,good old very active day!
Reminds of such an exact day in our younger days with friends and busy with imagination that felt so real and happening soon types... Enjoyed it @dave!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave W.

2 Months Ago

Thank you, for the review, It feels like another time in a different world.

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Added on November 14, 2024
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Tags: Youth, Play, Late, Night

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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