Love's Homeland

Love's Homeland

A Poem by Dave W.
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Amore speaks sweet nothing's, Eros calls out into the night....

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Selfishly I drink your cup, 
that taste still on my lips. 

I will have all of you, 
this fragrance intoxicates, 
your eyes allure, 
draw me in and I am lost. 

With joy I give my self on love's pyre, 
ignited by passions spark, 
this night will last to eternities end, 
two spirits mingled into one without boundaries. 

Lets explore this plane of being, 
this realm of the possible. 

Let us have our fill of love, 
overflowing, 
uncontained, 
boundlessly free in each others arms.  

Tell me of your home land, 
talk to me of your hearts desires, 
share these secrets deep, 
speak of thoughts had at night, 
your delights hunger.  

You are my oasis in a land starved for love's sacred drink.  
I will tell you all my heart, 
there are no doors locked, 
you have the key. 

Make your abode with me, 
walk freely in its chambers explore all.  

We are one, 
I will spend what life I have left, 
on this earth with you, 
we journey together. 

© 2024 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
Love has depths not yet explored....

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The intent at the back of this poem is true, love has depths not yet explored. When we start to love each other we never know any of others but we fell in love thinking we would or love each otger beyond. Slowly we know more of a person. But as we journey together there will be some situations which are being created by others will test our patience, then at that situation how we react will definitely prove others how much we adore. Few people feel jealous few doesnt like or want, us together, trying to put oil in fire, then that is the best moment they would understand us how much we adore, let us not get into becoming a bait or easy target our emotions which we also didnt think of us to be to react so. Love nurtures every feeling to a beautiful filling yge gaps which others want us to get into. Yes, there are some situations lemons were tgrew on us, thinking we will get hurt but tgey are losing tgeir stuff by yhrowing at us. Thats everything i would say. When there is love mo one even if dares to get it breached because it is our love everywhere spread even if they they try to cut it, it just a new parts of two with two of us as one part each.

Om purna madhah purnam mudham
Purnath purnamudhachyathey
Purnasya purna madhaya
Purna meva vasishyathey
Om shanthi !

Missing your love and which you express in your writings.
Jessy Jacob
J&J.


Posted 2 Hours Ago


Dave W.

1 Hour Ago

Thankyou so much for this review, it touched my heart
The breadth and length love is boundless. Time itself stretches into eternity. You have traveled the scope of your love, your desire and you have done so - beautifully.

Take care - Dave
(I see that you post as David W. I always post as Dave- Nice meeting you.- Dave

Posted 5 Hours Ago


Dave W.

1 Hour Ago

Dave is a great name, every Dave I have met has been great, thank you for the review
Wow! A very romantic and sensually write from your poetic pen, Dave. Think your pen was on fire when you wrote it ;)) I love the idea of journeying together with someone we absolutely adore and exploring both life and love forever. Magical write, Dave! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 11 Hours Ago


Dave W.

1 Hour Ago

Marie i love this review you are awesome
Marie

1 Hour Ago

Most welcome always, Dave...
Wow. So very romantic and passionate. The way love ought to be. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 12 Hours Ago


Dave W.

12 Hours Ago

Yep I have to write it like I feel it.
And yet this has so many depths as you put it and layers that are both intelligent and beautiful.

Posted 13 Hours Ago


Dave W.

13 Hours Ago

Thank you for the kind words.

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