Moving On......

Moving On......

A Poem by Dave W.
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I am going to try to move on and not return......

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I think I'll move on, 
from this place  familiar, 
once again visited, 
swore I'd never return. 

I think I'll move on, 
from sadness felt here, 
just over the rise, 
moving toward the future.

I think I'll move on, 
from this life of a rut, 
I'm pressing on forward, 
depressions door shut.

I think I'll move on, 
from  thoughts so negative, 
practice thanks giving, 
a new life will I live

© 2024 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
We have to move on and not live in the pain of the past

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A worthy ambition here. We get stuck in negative ruts and for some reason remain there. Move on, by all means.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Yeah h moving on really is one of the tricks to life
Letting go can be difficult, but it must be done, to move forward.

Keep reaching for the stars, Dave. : )

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Brandy you inspire me, thankyou
Brandy

1 Month Ago

So sweet of you to say. :)
Absolutely ... look a brighter future where you are well-appreciated and well-appreciating. Lovely write. Left e smiling:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you Pryde for the review
Moving on such an important step toward happieness and progression. Written so well with a tempo that pulls the reader on with you. Lovely

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you sir,

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Added on November 5, 2024
Last Updated on November 6, 2024
Tags: Moving, On, Life, Lived

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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