Auburn fire

Auburn fire

A Poem by Dave W.
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Red hair is awesome

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Her face in my mind,

auburn hair flows in the wind,

heart aches for a kiss.

© 2024 Dave W.


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Dave W.
Love the autumn love

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Red hair is awesome... I remember the movie "brave"...
Lovely writing..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

Jeyanthi thank you so much for the kind words.
A beautiful Senryu filled with longing and so romantically inked! Excellent choice of graphic to complement your words, Dave. Lovely little gem...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Marie, for the review.
Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Most welcome, Dave...
Well coming from a country that practically invented redheads (I know it was Ireland, but we were from there long before we decamped to Scotland when someone said "Follow me, I know a place even colder!) I would advise never turning your back on a redhead. Its not only their hair that is fiery. I used to date one, right up until my insomnia made it impossible to fall asleep in the same zip code as her for fear of waking up without my bits!
They be crazy! 😃

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

I don't care if they are crazy, red hair and green eye is my kyptonite.
Lorry

2 Weeks Ago

I do like green eyes though. My own thing though would pair them up with raven hair. Much safer! �.. read more
Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

And then if there's an accent, I'm done for
Lovely haiku! The image of flowing auburn hair is clear, and the last line really shows deep longing. It beautifully captures a quiet, heartfelt moment.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

Thankyou Tumi

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Added on November 1, 2024
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Tags: She, is, out, of, reach

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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I love to write poetry and hope that something I create will connect with someone that needs to read it more..

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