Alone togehter

Alone togehter

A Poem by Dave W.
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Alone and together what a contradiction.....

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Alone again, 
yet you, 
faithful reader, 
one who reads all this nonsense, 
are with me. 

Alone I type, 
alone you read,
here we are connected, 
together alone. 

Words crafted from thoughts, 
from nowhere, 
from everywhere, 
from above, 
from below.  

Are you good, 
are you fine, 
how was the day, 
I really want to know?  

Is it a battle, 
is it a bed of ease, 
are you just beginning, 
or at the end?  

Across the world, 
or a neighbor just across the way, 
anybody, 
you can be anybody. 

Here I type, 
desiring connection, 
typing alone while I connect with your heart alone, 
I will never really know, 
just typing in faith, 
hoping I can reach somebody, 
it's just us, here in this room.

© 2024 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
Note for you dear reader, I hope your day is going well......

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' here we are connected, together alone. '
So deep and emotional.

The entire poem tugs at my heart. So many tender thoughts linger within.
It's like you're reaching out, and someone is there, yet, you still feel so alone.

Soft sigh.



Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Low points like depression, loneliness, self doubt, imposter syndrome....
Brandy

1 Month Ago

Oh, okay. I understand what you mean. When negative emotions tangle around the heart, always remem.. read more
Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Exactly........
Dave,
Not a lot different from sticking a note in a bottle and tossing it into the ocean. I have "friends" on this site in New Zealand, Australia, England, Scotland, and all over America...
Vol

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Exactly, thank you Vol
Check out Melanie's song "Together Alone" online.
I really like your stanza saying you write alone and we the reader read alone.
So true. It is our little get together, between Poet and Reader...our little interaction.
And even when we lose loved ones, we are not quite alone.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Oh I like this sentiment very much
i am with you man... this being alone all the time is surely not good for the soul. but alas, not really any other choice.
and it's not just the two of us. there is a loneliness pandemic and the WHO are saying how many health and social issues have arisen as a result. things have got to change around here, humans weren't made for this.
and i like the poem. while you may have been talking about this particular site, it could well resonate with others who use social media as their prosac. i won't name the platform, but there's one which is definitely full of lonely users typing away.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Facts, i love all the feed back on all my writings but I realize I write them alone and read them al.. read more
Ern M. Yoshimoto

1 Month Ago

if a screen is my only connection, i'll take it. haha.
Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Yesssss this is the way

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Added on October 28, 2024
Last Updated on October 28, 2024
Tags: Alone, Thoughts, Words, connection

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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A Poem by Dave W.