Stillness......

Peace in the quiet

Silent morning dream

All is still, listless I drift,

Isolating peace

 

Author's Note

There is peace in the quiet unplugged stillness of the morning.....

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

People stopped reviewing my write,
Is it because other all people doesnt want them to write rdviews for me, they just dont want to. Its fine, i am not poet either.
I dont edit my poem for typos. I dont hav that much luxury of doing then correcting. I hope people understand littls typos.


But i love poetry that doesnt hurt anyone' feelings. I like to read who writes their sad moments or happy or inspires others or even scolds but one who writes sarcastically just only to hurt or blame and get reviewed by forcefully defintely not i like to read or review them.

Rome Juliet, on one day,
Passed a sea. Thinking will this sea
Keeps our secret love
Not letting bygone by the tides wiping on sand write
He said, sea just merges into oceans but nothing can divide or distinguish only people distribute this part is sea and whole this part is ocean. I say the water and land mass on earth are always together like tracks on railway line, never meeting but together traveling.
Shs was so surprised and happy you are my love my heart beat my breath how can i make it breathless without you in my body, i dont bother being breathless gives pleasure for a minute i dont think i will need that a minute which separates us 60 seconds apart.


This is my love story story of my lover and huzband traveling togetger not in a one home though, the sky keeping our memory of love of life in this birth.

Thank you for reading my little patterned decorative write which may touch your heart .


Jessy Jacob,
Definitely i need a review from you Sir.

[Dave W.]

I will read it and review

[JessyJacob]

Thamk you. Received your reviews. Really appreciate your concern and time.

[emmajoygreen]

Perfection: peace with time to merely 'stand and stare' Have a prism hung at the window and watch snatches of sunlight create rainbows on walls, skin, minds.. ..

[Dave W.]

It's nice to escape from the people and things we go to to escape being isolated. To unplug and just be

[emmajoygreen]

Yesssss! Noise - we can make. Peace is its own master, havoc dismayed, quiet unmade?