Autumn remembrances

This is my first try at a Tanka

October is here.

The year winds down to an end.

Branches shaken bare.

I think of past Halloweens,

years of fun and merriment

 

Author's Note

I just wanted to see if I could write one with encouragement from a great poet.

Reviews

[Marie]

Perfect Tanka which captures October and the joy of Hallowe'en superbly! Well done, Dave! You can be very proud of you. Your choice of graphic is excellent and complements the words of your Tanka. Heartiest Congratulations! Well done, Dave! Magnificent first attempt, seems you have been writing Haiku, Senryu and Tanka all your life, you are SO good at inking them... Lovely work!

[Dave W.]

Thank you for the kind words, you are an encouragement needed.

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Dave...