For Mary.....

Strawberries are awesome....

Berries bought today,

I smile with happy delight

Sugar laced goodness.

Author's Note

Can there be anything better?

Reviews

[Marie]

Wow! What an amazing Senryu you have crafted in this succulent write, Dave. Love the excellent choice of graphic which complements your words so eloquently. Sublime imagery! I love the whole Senryu but this is my most favourite line "Sugar laced goodness!" What a gem! A delectable write, which I so enjoyed reading and almost eating! You have mastered both Tanka and Senryu superbly! Well done! Thank you for sharing, Dave ~Marie~

[Dave W.]

Tanka is now a new word I have learned.

[Marie]

Try it out, Dave. I know you will make a success of it also...

[Dave W.]

Maybe....I appreciate your confidence...

[Dave W.]

Alright Marry I have a Tanka for you, I will post it and tell me what you think.

[Marie]

Thank you, Dave...