Wow! What an amazing Senryu you have crafted in this succulent write, Dave. Love the excellent choice of graphic which complements your words so eloquently. Sublime imagery! I love the whole Senryu but this is my most favourite line "Sugar laced goodness!" What a gem! A delectable write, which I so enjoyed reading and almost eating! You have mastered both Tanka and Senryu superbly! Well done! Thank you for sharing, Dave ~Marie~
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Tanka is now a new word I have learned.
2 Months Ago
Try it out, Dave. I know you will make a success of it also...
Wow! What an amazing Senryu you have crafted in this succulent write, Dave. Love the excellent choice of graphic which complements your words so eloquently. Sublime imagery! I love the whole Senryu but this is my most favourite line "Sugar laced goodness!" What a gem! A delectable write, which I so enjoyed reading and almost eating! You have mastered both Tanka and Senryu superbly! Well done! Thank you for sharing, Dave ~Marie~
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Months Ago
Tanka is now a new word I have learned.
2 Months Ago
Try it out, Dave. I know you will make a success of it also...