You have captured being disconnected from people and events superbly in this little Senryu, Dave. Following this disconnection you find happiness in aloneness, as most poets do, including myself. Knowing all is well, ends the Senryu so finely. Excellently inking! You mastered both Haiku and Senryu superbly in a very short space of time. These types of poem are addictive, I found and I love to write them too. Wonderful write! So enjoyed! Thank you for sharing, Dave...
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I would not have even thought to have tried my hand at this if not for your words, so thank you. Th.. read moreI would not have even thought to have tried my hand at this if not for your words, so thank you. Thank you for the reveiw and the kind words.
You have captured being disconnected from people and events superbly in this little Senryu, Dave. Following this disconnection you find happiness in aloneness, as most poets do, including myself. Knowing all is well, ends the Senryu so finely. Excellently inking! You mastered both Haiku and Senryu superbly in a very short space of time. These types of poem are addictive, I found and I love to write them too. Wonderful write! So enjoyed! Thank you for sharing, Dave...
Posted 4 Hours Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Hours Ago
I would not have even thought to have tried my hand at this if not for your words, so thank you. Th.. read moreI would not have even thought to have tried my hand at this if not for your words, so thank you. Thank you for the reveiw and the kind words.