We have strayed so far from the right path that it may come to pass we will never get to return to the time when we were at one, or at least, if not at one, so much closer to the natural order of things.
Sadly, this is the truth of our world.
Beccy.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Thank you for reading my poem, i hope you have a great day.
We have strayed so far from the right path that it may come to pass we will never get to return to the time when we were at one, or at least, if not at one, so much closer to the natural order of things.
Sadly, this is the truth of our world.
Beccy.
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
Thank you for reading my poem, i hope you have a great day.
great info, strong imagery
Predatory practices on unsuspecting masses,
Bright colored packages,
Cyanide and happiness.
Windowpane glass crashes
the rhetorical question that followed up was perfect
very good
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you for the kind words. Thank you for reading my poem.
I woke up only three to four years ago it’s a shock to the system and then try to wake others up is so frustrating
Great write ✍️
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
Thank you for reading my poem, and thank you for the review. If one has eyes to see, all becomes cl.. read moreThank you for reading my poem, and thank you for the review. If one has eyes to see, all becomes clear.