Fear

Fear has no power here......

Fear arrived again,

This time I did not answer,

bother someone else....

Reviews

[Brandy]

I'm not wishing for fear to consume anyone.
The truth is: It's difficult escaping this emotion.

' This time I did not answer. '
This thought brings a smile. : ) Good for you, Dave.

: ) Happy Sunday !

[Dave W.]

Good day Brandy, it was a happy Sunday and thank you for reading the poem.

[emmajoygreen]

Your words are so thoughtful.. paused to seriously consider: this is as deep as an ocean.

[Dave W.]

Thank you for reading it, your feed back is appreciated.

[emmajoygreen]

Fear comes in different sizes and shapes: is quite a subject in a small space.

[Dave W.]

Facts and truth you speak

[Arundass TP]

Written beautifully. Good work

[Dave W.]

Thank you for reading it.

[Lorry]

Nicely captured senryu. They look easy until you try them and realise sometimes less is more and packing a punch into seventeen syllables us harder than you think.
One of the first ones I wrote was my favourite. I'm not at 350 odd and still try to better it.
I did have it posted on here once but has disappeared. It went along the lines of this...

Walking on water
I felt like the chosen one...
until it melted! 😃

[Dave W.]

That's really good, This is my second Haiku, I have never written them before. Thank you for the review