Autumn chill

Autumn chill

A Poem by Dave W.
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Early morning autumn chill moment captured and felt...

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Crisp autumn wind blows past,
remnants of the summer are taken away.
Change has arrived,
faithful and constant.
Contemplation of the year that’s spent,
the year still to come.
Thankful for the blessings,
learning from the pain,
hoping for the future,
silent in the present.
Early morning stillness on city streets,
quieted homes rest peacefully awaiting the day
I'm lost in calm habitation of mind,
silent reverie of life,
my place in the world.
A chill runs through,
I snap out of thought,
I wish I brought a sweater…..

© 2024 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
I work graveyard and was on break thinking about life the universe and everything....the answer is 42....

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Gee
Couldn't imagine working anything but "normal" hours, must play havoc with the body clock.
Always amazes me how words come to us. I look back on much that I have written and cannot believe the words came from me.
Your interaction with emmaj interested me as "like" and even some reviews are just a way of the reader trying to lure the writer to their page:)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

Emmaj is one I consider a great writer on here and someone I look up to, thank you for the review.
Gee

2 Weeks Ago

She is super talented and a very good egg
Dave W.

2 Weeks Ago

Good eggs are awesome.
Smiling at your note. :) 42 is always the answer.

Yes, seasons change and temps rearrange.
While we wish some things would stay the same, they're not meant to.
We must be ready, indeed.

A friendly reminder to grab a sweater next time. :)
That Autumn wind can create chill bumps. Brrrr.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

I see you are also a person of class knowing the writings of Douglas Adams. When I wrote it, it was.. read more
Brandy

1 Month Ago

I appreciate the compliment, Dave. :)

I hope your day is wonderful in every way.
The ending…unexpected, a little
off chartered skip… made it real


Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading it, it was a cold morning when I wrote it, I was wearing short sleeves....
Chuckling at your Hitchhiker note.

Fall is good blanket weather.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave W.

1 Month Ago

thank you very much, it is very good blanket weather.
Thoughts gained in advance that move from here to there - somehow similar but each having its own intention..

'Thankful for the blessings,
learning from the pain,
hoping for the future,
silent in the present.'
^
v
'A chill runs through,
I snap out of thought,
I wish I brought a sweater…..'

Posted 1 Month Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave W.

1 Month Ago

but did you like it?
emmajoygreen

1 Month Ago

I read, interpreted best I could. I could have viewed but left nothing. 'Like' means little or nothi.. read more
Dave W.

1 Month Ago

Thank you, you are absolutely right about "Like", I can be dense and a little slow at times, I appre.. read more

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Added on October 7, 2024
Last Updated on October 7, 2024
Tags: Morning, Cold, Autumn, Contemplation

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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