The river

The river

A Poem by Dave W.
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Life is a river we are all floating down....

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Here and now, 

On a journey from the past into tomorrow, 

Time is a river and there is only one way out.
There are peaceful lazy moments and roaring rapids rage.
Eddies of complacency and pools of stagnation.
Still traveling downstream and waterfalls rush to meet you.
What began so slow, 

Almost as if not moving at all, 

Has quickened its pace, 

There is no going back.
Many met on the way, 

Each on their own river trip.
Some for a moment and others a little longer, all temporary.

A life time of learn the river and still new twists and turns, 

Still new surprises joys and triumphs.
Don't fall out of the raft, anchor your feet in,

The paddle captain will guide, in places you haven't been.
The water's choppy now, hard paddle to the right, 

You hear a call from behind, another obstacle avoided, you're doing just fine.

© 2024 Dave W.


Author's Note

Dave W.
We are all carried down the river of life, as it was in the beginning so shall it end..

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Good metaphor of life, with its ups and downs , its twists and turns. Enjoyed!

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Dave W.

1 Week Ago

I am glad you enjoyed it, thankyou for reading it.
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

You are welcome sir.
Nicely written poem. Loved it

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave W.

1 Week Ago

Thankyou for reading it.

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Added on October 4, 2024
Last Updated on October 4, 2024
Tags: Life, Truth, River, Time

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Dave W.
Dave W.

Tigard, OR



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