Frozen Skies

This is a song I wrote a little bit ago

Broken and beaten hes ready to die 

His eyes search for his last glimpse of sky

But grey is all he sees as it starts to rain

Slowly he sits up, fighting through the pain

Through torrential rain and thunder taunting him

He brings himself to his feet and surveys the world so grim

Stumbling down a well worn trail

The rain begins to turn to hail

Broken and beaten hes not ready to die

For one last time he must see the sky

This is his one final wish

The only time in his life he is selfish

Limping along being pounded by hail

This is a quest he cannot fail

His pace is steady but oh so slow

The hail stops and it starts to snow

He slips and falls, sprawled on the ground

Laid on his back, unable to make a sound

His limbs grow cold and he begins to cry

He knows never again will he see the sky

Broken and beaten about to die

He franticly searches the clouds for sky

He lays there still as his life leaves

From his chest his last breath heaves

In desperation his eyes open for an instant

The sky is there, so blue and distant

With a smile he closes his eyes

And with his dream fulfilled he slowly dies

Author's Note

Let me know what you think. Any and all feedback is more than welcome

Reviews

[Aka_Kitsune]

excellent, very well written, the storyline is very engaging and i love it :D