RUBY

a poem dedicated to a friend named Ruby

RUBY
As a baby,
I was told rubies were rare,
As a kid,
I was taught they're precious,
As a boy,
I sought after them,
But they're so had to find,
They're worth a fortune.

So I kept watch,
Looking for a perfect heart,
Made with glittering red ruby,
Cuz it worth the price,
Love and peace are it's chambers,
Beating in rhythm-
It puts everyone at rest,
And takes away ev'ry fear.

Your worth more than any ruby-
Ever found or made.
Far more than anyone could afford,
Your a priceless.
A gem to the beholder,
And a blessing to ur parents.
I just want to say-
'Am blessed to know you, Ruby'

Author's Note

your criticism is highly welcomed, thought of trying something new

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

The only truly priceless treasure in all the world is an honest, true and sacred love.

NOTES
"I was [taught] they're precious,"

[prince digbani]

Thanks mom..Note taken

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[prince digbani]

Thanks for the review Emily

[DoormanDan]

This is a truly touching poem you've written here for your friend. It has a very strong and positive message, and would easily make anybody happy regardless of how bad of a day they were having. Brilliant job! :)

[prince digbani]

thanks for all your encouraging remarks on my poems.