WHO AM I?

Love poem

Who am I to question love?
Who am I to resist love?
Who am I? I ask “who am I?”
Like every other day,
I arose from bed,
Without hopes of falling in-love,
But who am I to conclude.
Like a sheep being led,
I was taken to her bosom.
I objected.
But who am I? OH! Who am I?
Who am I to object love?
Who am I? I ask “who am I?”
In her beautifully shaped body,
She surpassed every beauty ever seen.
Who am I? OH! Who am I?
Not to see her beauty.

Author's Note

I would gladly receive your constructive critism

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

I've known many people who looked back and recognized the beauty they'd missed right beside them while looking for some pie-in-the-sky something that never was. We, humans, get bogged down looking for something "out there" so hard that we're blind to what's right at the end of our fingertips.

NOTES: Like a sheep [being] led,

[DoormanDan]

It's very easy to miss what we have right in front of us. This poem flows very well, and you made it deliver more strongly with all the exclamation points and question marks. those really help tell what emotion is being portrayed. Good job! :)

[prince digbani]

Thanks. I am glad that you
enjoyed it!