HARK HARK

Xmas poem

Hark hark
We were taught
The angels sang
On the birth of the glorious king
Waking up a sleeping star in the sky
We all arose to celebrate him

With merry in our hearts
We hooked the mistletoes
Singing a song of joy
As we dance round the Christmas tree
Hoping Santa enters through the chimney
And drop our gifts

Waking up in the morning
With gifts from Santa beside our Christmas tree
We run round the house
Singing and dancing
As we race to tell every one

Reviews

[Isa Ruffatti]

I really like your poem, very christmasy! In the last line, I'm not quite sure but I think every one would be everyone... I like how you start with hark hark, maybe add a coma? Keep writing!