LOVE PROPOSAL

a poem dedicated to any new spouse

Looking straight into my eyes,

You would find nothing but love,

Arising from the inner depths of my heart,

Desiring to be with you always.

 

In your presence,

I feel nothing but love,

Over-taking all my emotions,

And wishing to be with only you.

 

OH! How at your presence,

My heart races just to cling to you,

Hoping you will never leave,

That is how I feel about you.

 

OH! How I cling to you for love,

Like a new born baby clinging to his mother for milk.

Waking up each morning hoping to have you lying next to me,

I dream to give a ring someday.

Reviews

[Frank]

Your highness or royal highness, cross out the wrong address. Not my cup of tea, your work reminds me of soppy Christmas cards and other assorted sentiment bought for a pound at Woolworth. You use all the hackneyed words they use and fail to move your reader.

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely, joyful words you've penned.

[prince digbani]

thanks for the review

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I messaged you some minor edits and form suggestions. Disregard them if you choose; they're only suggestions.

[prince digbani]

thanks just did the correction

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.