A plain roomA Story by MaxA man wakes up in a place he does not recognize.He awoke in a strange, foreign place. A square room, four
walls, all concrete. He could see everything clearly, despite there being no
obvious light source. His feet were cold, why were his feet cold? Looking down,
he could see that his feet were bare, exposed to the cold, unfeeling concrete
floor. Right, that explains it. There was a wooden table with a chair next to
it in the center of the room. It looked like something police might use to
interrogate criminals, but he was no criminal. His eyes caught a glint of light
from across the room. A doorknob. He rushed over to open the door, only to find
that there was no door, only more concrete. “This is strange,” he thought. “Why
would somebody put a doorknob on the wall?” He heard his thoughts echo
throughout the room. Oh, he said that out loud. He began to grow worried. He
felt his knees grow weak, and he sat down in the chair. The chair was not comfortable. It made him feel like someone
had grabbed hold of his spine and was gently squeezing it. Upon looking at the
table, he noticed a sheet of paper. Maybe this would explain something. Nope,
blank. He crumpled up the paper, and threw it away from him. That’s when he noticed
it. A small imperfection in the concrete, up where the ceiling met the wall. He
grabbed his chair and dragged it over to the wall below. As he climbed onto the
chair, he got a splinter in his foot. Oh right, he forgot he didn’t have any
shoes. The concrete had a dent in it, as if it had been worn down. He began
banging on the wall. “Help! Somebody get me out of here! I’m not supposed to be
here!” he screamed. He banged and banged, until his fist grew raw and began
bleeding. He stopped, and laid his head against the wall, feeling the smooth
concrete against his forehead. That’s when he noticed it: the blood. There was
his own blood, of course, but there was more. It was dried up, as if it had
been left there for days. He slowly backed down from the chair, and took a slow
look around the room. He was confused, none of this was making any sense. He noticed
a small hole in the wall, the size of a keyhole. He ran over to it, and tried
to stick his finger through. No luck. He bent himself over and looked through the
opening. What he saw horrified him. He backed away slowly. Another room, identical to the one he
found himself caged in. How could this be? How did he end up here? What was
this place, and how was he going to get out? He turned around to find that the
chair was back. So was the paper. Everything back in the same place as when he awoke.
He rushed over, almost falling on himself as he did. He needed to keep his
sanity, so he decided to do the only thing he could think of: write his name.
He picked at the scab that had begun to form on his fist until it bled again.
He ran his finger over it to gather his writing material. He began writing on
the paper, B… R… A… D. That was his name, Brad. For some reason he had a hard
time remembering that. He turned the paper over, only to find that Brad was
written out dozens of times on the other side. This was not right. None of this
made any sense. He felt a pressure in his head, as if his brain was about to
burst out. His ears were ringing, and whoever had a grip on his spine was now
crushing it. His knees grew weak, and against his will gave out on him. He
collapsed into a twitching pile, struggling for each breath he took. The room
slowly went dark, as did he. He awoke in a strange, foreign place. © 2018 Max |
StatsAuthorMaxTroy, MIAboutJust an amateur writer. Not looking to be a professional, but definitely want to improve my writing. more..Writing
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