bee 1.

  

 

 

   I should conclude that

   orbit is prelude to

   destination.Certainly

   no more sensitized than

   perfect pitch or chit-chat

   with a corpse.

   Apple blossom or

   Pair blossom. Which

   gland parcels paradise?

   What other tending

   gravity, a sentence

   too far a load?

 

 

   I petitioned sky,

   the bird that envys

   your loft, the

   philter of the room,

   the petulant stone

   thrown by the child or

   the protective mother

   with her jars of spray;

   just sentence for

   your ungracious moon.

   The practiced memory

   to know the way and

   yes

   this route return.

   Enact the brazen,

   undeniable,

   courtyards trident

   bloom.

 

 

   First nerve,

   then thrill,

   then everlasting doom.         

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                       hder

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[...]

. this, for me, is a rather powerful, unique, and, infinitely poetic expression of the classic learning cycle that we as human beings go through ... somehow in that "everlasting doom" poetry happens ... and if it's poetry as exquisite as this ... then even "everlasting doom" becomes a bit more bearable ...

[Corset]

I would love to hear you read these Dan, like Emily indicated below, though i don't think my system could hand the overload, lol, I would probably loop them all on a cd and never leave my room again.

[Emily B]

these would be good words to meet out loud, i bet you have an incredible voice

[Leslie Philibert]

I`ve read a number of poems by this writer, and they are excellent, they have an acute and erudite imagist approach, remind me somewhat of Ezra Pound and explode with poetic and metaphorical quality, good writing