Vow

Call me boring

but I want a simple wedding.

no fancy hall. no expensive dress.

no food. no dj playing oldies.

no guest. 

no husband.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha love this h d! yes ... we "husbands" can be a project of tolerance indeed ;] at first as i read i was saying "Wow! ... i want to marry this girl!" simple wedding ... not expensive ...then i'm hit with "no husband" .... indeed! ... love the sardonic humor ..delivered with fine timing :))))))))))))))))))
E.

[h d e rushin]

i've noticed myself being (trying to be ) too intellectual. Not saying that i will stop trying. Just saying that sometimes, after writing a poem, i hate myself. thank you my friend for your kind comment...dana

[Einstein Noodle]

yes .. working the intellect is much like draining ones pool of emotions .. wringing the last bit out there must come a time of repose eh!?

[Corset]

lolololol, golden! ~the perfect wedding!

[h d e rushin]

sometimes i write as the opposite gender; sometimes i dress as the opposite gender. Thank you love....dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

now that is what i call, the bare necessities.

i hope you have reservations for one...for the honeymoon...
i love this...great ending for a smile.
j.

[h d e rushin]

i wrote this after talking to a friend of mine. Married for 26 years, two kids, middle aged and now divorced. I told her that before she starts over, she has to strip the world of the bare necessities. The first man you meet you cant want to marry (I told her). Yeah, dana the marriage counselor. Imagine that? thanks brother for your kind words....dana

[CD Campbell]

Maybe a commitment to ones self is for the best. At least you know what you're getting.

[h d e rushin]

that got me thinking CD. Is writing poetry a commitment to one's self? Since it's mostly self centered, egotistical, egoistical, selfish, confessional and self loathing. But I did the idea. thanks brother...dana

[CD Campbell]

Nah. Idk... just seems a lonely endeavor at times.

[Delmar Cooper]

Much may be said in praise of the simple
but isn't
it's complicated

[h d e rushin]

there is much security in simplicity, me thinks....thanks Delmar....dana