I was caught in an active landslide 2 weeks ago; rocks hurtling against the side of the bus, 300' drop on the other side. We were able to back up in time, and get free, as this time, the land was too dry, not mud. The folks in Alta Verapaz were not so lucky, I heard, as another settlement was washed out at the same time. Until 2 days ago, my birthday, the only place in the country still getting rain.
I remember when this happened, dana. We watched the news with horror as the stories trickled, than poured in. Analysis of what went wrong; defining human hubris and underestimating rainfall's ability to change so much, so quickly. A lesson we could have taught you from mountain living here. And you, filling in the details, animals frightened into horror, the lightning speed at which these things happen, the final moments running for safety... ant making it, to that final haunting and poignant question.
And woven through your terrifying image of death; the sheer bounty of life. I have known a few librarians in my ttime. Like pharmacists, they know your secrets, don't you think?
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
ps: tell me what you want me to do with small typos and misspellings? I sometimes find them, and wan.. read moreps: tell me what you want me to do with small typos and misspellings? I sometimes find them, and want to know if it ok to gently correct.
10 Years Ago
you can correct for my anything your heart desires my friend..
"it's prey" should be "its prey"
"tradgey" is "tragedy"
10 Years Ago
lol..I need one of those spell check, format jober-doos or your assistance..I prefer your assitance... read morelol..I need one of those spell check, format jober-doos or your assistance..I prefer your assitance..dana
10 Years Ago
LOL in that case, I be careful to include a follow-up message after a review, with little correctins.. read moreLOL in that case, I be careful to include a follow-up message after a review, with little correctins for you. From here on out.
love,
R
I was caught in an active landslide 2 weeks ago; rocks hurtling against the side of the bus, 300' drop on the other side. We were able to back up in time, and get free, as this time, the land was too dry, not mud. The folks in Alta Verapaz were not so lucky, I heard, as another settlement was washed out at the same time. Until 2 days ago, my birthday, the only place in the country still getting rain.
I remember when this happened, dana. We watched the news with horror as the stories trickled, than poured in. Analysis of what went wrong; defining human hubris and underestimating rainfall's ability to change so much, so quickly. A lesson we could have taught you from mountain living here. And you, filling in the details, animals frightened into horror, the lightning speed at which these things happen, the final moments running for safety... ant making it, to that final haunting and poignant question.
And woven through your terrifying image of death; the sheer bounty of life. I have known a few librarians in my ttime. Like pharmacists, they know your secrets, don't you think?
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
ps: tell me what you want me to do with small typos and misspellings? I sometimes find them, and wan.. read moreps: tell me what you want me to do with small typos and misspellings? I sometimes find them, and want to know if it ok to gently correct.
10 Years Ago
you can correct for my anything your heart desires my friend..
"it's prey" should be "its prey"
"tradgey" is "tragedy"
10 Years Ago
lol..I need one of those spell check, format jober-doos or your assistance..I prefer your assitance... read morelol..I need one of those spell check, format jober-doos or your assistance..I prefer your assitance..dana
10 Years Ago
LOL in that case, I be careful to include a follow-up message after a review, with little correctins.. read moreLOL in that case, I be careful to include a follow-up message after a review, with little correctins for you. From here on out.
love,
R
Worn like the buttons on an elevator... The imagery, is off the hook in this piece, brother. There is a deep earthiness to this that is resting somewhere between shock and comfort, and love, ––– and repulsion. A full bodied poem, every sense every taste bud has been covered and every square inch of my shoes has been soiled, rich. Deep and rich.
it's getting deep as quick sand in here, the name is Mud my friend, down and dirt-y, thick as a pack of thieves these Eves, and you there looking so innocent and wide eyed, well itchy well, leopards and spots, and ahab sailors, oh my! friend or foe or the schmo next dowh, you are brilliant brilliant brillant and I h-ate you...mostly, by the pie eating gulpfuls, dewey like the rainforest is humidly breeding sweat beads.
It's getting Ginsberg-esque in here (I mean the good Ginsberg, before he decided to do readings in Bloomingdale's.) It takes some doing to take a singular event, be it tragic or mundane, and give it this kind of breadth, to make it big as a damn house. Enviable, sweeping work.