Choke

Choke

A Poem by drunkxkid

I wanna get to know you
inside and out
please, take your shoes off

I want to know what goes through your head
when you sip coffee
do you even like coffee?

open up to me
what makes you anxious
what is it that makes your palms sweaty
and stupid butterfly's in your stomach 

because mine is you
you are the one thing that makes me 
the saddest but also the happiest
but why?

i was too mesmerized by your 
touch to realize that your fingers
were around my neck 

how long have you been
chocking me?

© 2014 drunkxkid


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I love how quickly it changed from almost a peaceful mindset, to fear and being trapped.. I really hope you post more, I like your style!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awe, this reminds me of my dad, being blinded by love when the person right next to you can see the real issue, this is romantic yet sad, I like it. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I enjoyed this. I understand the point you are trying to make. Good job. I hope to see more from you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow I liked your poem it's truly shocking. nicely written

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2014
Last Updated on February 26, 2014
Tags: poem, love, hurt

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drunkxkid
drunkxkid

Stockton, CA



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