Death by Rain

Pain:Adjective  1)A severe or moderate emotion, 2)An illusion of the mind,
3)A sensation felt after being hurt, ...4)My Drug.



They say that drowning's easy
simple, yet insane
How simple would be drowning
by tiny drops of rain?
I want to test my theory
Just how quickly could I die
I hope it happens slowly
For, it's the pain I wish to try.
Pours of blood
showers and mud
-It's all the same to me
I make mistakes then feel my wrath
I'm just your average "Emo" teen.

Reviews

[The Flawed]

I like this piece, it's fresh and different.

[Cait O'Shei]

nice, I like your word choice, try being a little more deliberate about your capitalization