Six Feet Beneath[2-23-09]

The emotion of a broken heart
The strength in my words
when I hope my ending would start.
Start and ending and reach in my chest
pull out a broken blob and place it in your hand
as if the words and drawings...Were no contest
They aren't sharp enough to explain my protest...
Pretending you aren't real can't begin to replace this.
I'm bleeding and dying every day you're away...
The longer you stay...
The closer I get to the grave...
But don't try to chase me
don't bow and pray
There's no way to please me..
Just release me...
Let me fade.

The pricelessness of your smiling face...
The beauty I found in your eyes that day...
The unrecognizably comforting phrase..
you spoke that night when I called your name...

It can't be replaced
It can't be mistaken
There's pain in your words
that I read on your page..then
reread again, in disbelief that you hurt...
Disbelief that you don't write about me
the way I speak of you in my crumpled frail words.

You're broken, I see
You're tested, I know
You're falling apart
Slowly fading as the days go.
I wish I could hold you
I wish I could heal you
But there's no way in hell
I could near your beauty enough to feel you.

You're precious
Yet faint
Filled with a sorrow
stronger than hate
-stronger than fate
or the faith of a saint.

It can't be replaced
It can't be mistaken
There's pain in your words
that I read on your page..then
reread again, in disbelief that you hurt...
Disbelief that you don't write about me
the way I speak of you in my crumpled frail words.

You're broken, I see
You're tested, I know
You're falling apart
Slowly fading as the days go.
I wish I could hold you
I wish I could heal you
But there's no way in hell
I could near your beauty enough to feel you.

As unimportant you may find my wishes
I hope your life is more pure
-not dispicably tasteless.
I hope you can fathom
the sharp pain your heart replaces.
Like tiny shards of glass, pressing deep into my soul
Crawling deeper and deeper, until my days end and fold
Slowly after, my body grows cold
and without your voice, your love, your life
-I will grow to be faceless, with a story untold.

You're broken, I see
You're tested, I know
You're falling apart
Slowly fading as the days go.
I wish I could hold you
I wish I could heal you
But there's no way in hell
I could near your beauty enough to feel you.

So please hear my pleas
Grasp the desire masked as fear
Please take my hand
Before you fall too far to hear.
I cannot lose you
Not again, Not now
I cannot withstand good-byes
No way, No how.
I'd fall to my knees
I'd mumble my pleas
Then take a last breath
and join you..
-Six feet beneath.

Author's Note

Even though I wrote this, I still haven't been able to analyze it enough to find what I meant.
Subconcious emotions that begged to bleed onto a paper. Tell me what you find in these words.

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