Time I keep takin'

my newest lyrics ... Tell me what you think.

Everyone likes what you're doin'
-hold your head high
Everyone's gotta keep movin'
Just to get by.

(chorus)
Time I keep takin'
is time I keep wastin'
I gotta hold onto my dream.
On the floor and I'm pacin'
on the floor and I'm wasted
Nobody is what they seem.
(/chorus)

Back to back
wall to wall
Watch me as I take the fall.
Tossed around
throw me down 
shun me for all the good I found.

[Chorus]

They hold me back when I'm walkin'
shut me up 'cuz I'm talkin'
I can't get a hold of myself. 
Take my hand 'cuz I'm shakin'
straighten up, I keep fakin'
I can't make it by myself.

 

Author's Note

should I repeat the chorus at the end?? Comments & critiques wanted!