Contemplating Suicide[7-2-08]

Contemplating suicide
Watching pain fall from my eyes
I'm weakness in its favorite form
Wishing I was never born
My frozen heart began to bleed
-I know no soul who'd miss this "me"
'Cause
[chorus:]
I'm weak
I fall
I'm losing all 'n' all
My love
Is lost
-Tell me, what's the cost
[end chorus]
I'll sell my soul back to the devil
I'll get back to your level
-raise. me. Up, You'll. see
I don't,  want. to. bleed
but
[chorus]
-------
I'll pay you back.with.tears
And all I have.Plus.fears
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-I can't stop myself
-I'm bad for my own health
     I'm contemplating suicide
-Finding ways I wanna die
For my own sake, I wonder why
  I'm weak
I fall
I've lost it all 'n' all
my love
Is gone
Now, Tell me what I've done.
  -I lost my only one

Author's Note

I wish I knew how to explain the beat. I guess, just read it like a poem. Enjoy!

Reviews

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

Wow.
This is beautiful.
I love it.
It's brilliant as a poem.
And it's incredible as a song.
Lovely rythme.
Great ryhming.
Nice flow of words.
Good form.
Excellent work.
Wonderfully written.
Great Job!
^_^