Bitter words[6-21-08]

What do you do
When the one you love can't be there
When second best doesn't care
When you need to go
But can't go anywhere?
What do you say
When love is really hate
When you love what you hate
When you need a clean slate
-Just forget about fate
And be lead to what's great?
Scream for help
-It doesn't work
All I have is more than I'm worth.
The words I say cannot explain
Their bitter taste will never change
Maybe, soon, I'll melt away
No more words for me to say
Their bitter taste will have to fade.
Kiss the free, unwilling breeze
And let this body feel at ease.

Reviews

[wicked]

Excellent poem. I really like how you put it all together. It really works well. Good job.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Very nicely written piece! The answers to your questions may be deep inside your mind. Be good to yourself! Sharon

[MissRed]

I love this! I'll have to read it a few more times!