My so-called 'fate' [6-11-08]

Sitting in a tear-rinsed bath
Thoughts of blood and hate arise
Too bad, she walked in just in time
Tears forming in her eyes.
"Are you okay? I had a feeling
that you will hurt yourself,
I was afraid for you
Can you prove your health?"
I flash with a glare
But she doesn't believe
'I hate her, I swear!
Why won't she just leave?'
I'm completely untrustable 
I'm weak and untrue
In the eyes of my mother
My honesty is new.
She stopped me that night
And as much as I hate it
-She saved my life.
The water was to change
From tear-filled and clear
To and awakening red
And confirm her fear.
I guess we know the ending
I guess I'm meant to live
I hope it makes you happy
I hope you will forgive

-me for my mistakes,
Please don't worry another day.

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