Three simple words [6-9-08]

Three simple words
But it still feels good
I'd buy you the world
If only I could.
I love you more
Than you could ever know
If only, this love,
I could ever show.
Told you you're my "Dream come true"
-You've opened up my eyes
Here is something I hope you knew
If only you were mine.
Three sweet words
That never melt away
But melt my heart
In the sweetest way.
I love you, I love you
It's more than just words
It consumes my mind
And mellows my hurt.

Author's Note

I was on the phone with the one person I can't stop loving... I couldn't help but write it for her.--To her. {I love you, I.L.S!!}

Reviews

[MissRed]

Very sweet and touching. Those three words... everyone can relate! More than just words that consume the mind...yes, I know that feeling. :)

[Pandy7197]

this is beautiful! Everyone who's ever loved someone can relate to this one! It's amazingly heart warming! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!!

[Gema]

aww i love this very well written and sweet i love it!
I like the way you've portrayed your love through poetry keep it up well done x

[Mariah]

AWWWWWWWW! you are so sweet to write about your girl. i love this poem...mine are a wee bit dark lately but that's just cuz i have no one like you to give a s**t. you are really good at writing like that.

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

This is so beautiful=) I really enjoyed reading this piece=) Lovely work!=)