Spin and twist (I melt)[6-7-08]

Spin and twist, I try to stand
Please tell me you've got my hand
-hold me close to you
Chain me by your heart,-so true
Just let me melt away
Standing in the pouring rain
Kiss away the deaf'ning pain.
Free my aching soul
After all, you make me whole.
Spin and twist, I will not break
All I said was colored -Fake
-Black and so untrue
But I must hold on to you.
For the sake of all that's right
I sing to you, this very night
wishing for a joyous sight
-of seeing your sweet face
And soaking in the sweet embrace.
Spin and twist, this is where I fall
Losing you, I lost it all.
-I'm begging on my knees
I've melted with my tears to this
-Darkened wall, Black abyss.
Spinning -I'm confused
Tell me that I've not been used.

Author's Note

My cousin is making a song out of this. (Wish I could upload the sound!)

Reviews

[The Autumn Faerie]

I could definitely see this as a song.
It's got perfect feel for one.

Very well-written.

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a nice fiction