Life (old)

Life is too hard,

Life is too long,

Life has too much,

Hate to carry on.

 

Life has no meaning,

Life has no song,

Life holds too much,

Greed to live among.

 

Life has been sucky,

Life has been bland,

Life still hates me,

So, alone I must stand.

 

Life cares for no one,

Only for it's own,

I'm left here to die,

Forever alone.

 

Life may be good,

But only for few,

Soon you will find,

That life hates you, too.

 

Life may get better,

Life may get bright,

But whatever you do,

You must hold on tight.

 

Life may be crappy,

It may hate you, so,

But somebody loves you,

I thought you should know.

 

Life will not wait,

Life won't slow down,

Spend your time wisely,

Smile and never frown.

 

Life is too short,

To be down and blue,

Stop waisting your time,

There's better to do.

Reviews

[Li Li]

Life is something that we have been given as a gift. It seems, at times, as though we are given life just as a challenge. We either take life in stride, or allow life to beat us down.

Very agonizing piece, yet still gives that glimpse of hope at the end. Almost like you lost control, then gained it back again.

The rendition was something that is quite common, the meaning is something that we've all heard before.... But still... every time it's heart felt.

Bless!